Overall nice job Arianna. Now you just need to go bigger. And you did at the end. Remember your pacing. Faster pace, but also, there are so many little moments in here for you to make the character your own. Right now, you’re playing it a little safe. Take a risk. Snort when you laugh. React, react, react. While your Aunt is breaking this incredible news, I want to see (in your face) that your mind is blown! Just get a little closer to the character. Give her a backstory. She’s dorky, and naive and socially awkward. She’s messy. The kind of girl who picks up a burger and manages to get ketchup all over her. She’s the girl who cannot play sports, and gets picked last for Volleyball. She is clumsy! Tap into that. Have FUN with it. She gets made fun of ALL the time. So this news is just too much. She thinks her Aunt or Grandmother is yanking her chain. Yeah?
Go bigger. And always look for moments in the dialogue to distinguish yourself and get lost in the character. Make sense? But nice job overall! You’re getting better! xx